Thank you all for the wide appreciation of the story 'I luv u Papa'. I know I have kept you waiting for a long time for the next creation. Friends waiting is a part of life, we wait for things and events to happen, for people to come back, for our turns and so on....
I have tried to capture these feelings in my poem titled 'Intezar'. I hope you enjoy it . Please leave your comments. I am waiti........
Manisha
Gud morning mam! I appreciate your poem and like it. Your effort to define intejar is very nice...
ReplyDeleteSatish/14th ADR
Thank you Satish!
DeleteAwesome poem! truly amazing!
ReplyDeleteHi Believer
DeleteThanks for appreciating it. I hope I keep on writing things that you like.
Manisha
Very nice poem Ma'm.. would like to read more such poems.. Keep writing such beautiful poems.. All the best Ma'm!
ReplyDeleteShashikant Yadav
ADR 14
Intajar his kar raha tha apke is post ka...
ReplyDeletekatm hote hi is intjar ko,
Suro ho gaya hai intjar nai post ka....
ha ha ha ha ha
With Regards,
Shashi Ranjan
Great thought Shashi and thank u very much
ReplyDeleteI just want yo say...
har intezar ki hoti hai ek seema
jald hi khatm hogi yeh bhi
jab takphir se nahi hoti shuru aglel
intezar ki kari
chalti raheg
shayad ye yuhi
hamare tumahre beech
Very nice poem Ma'm.. would like to read more such poems.. Keep writing such beautiful poems.. All the best Ma'm!
ReplyDeletereality of intezar indeed...picture in background also compliments your poem...All the best...
ReplyDeleteA very nice poem by you aunty! inspired by this poem of yours and stories i have written something as well. i dunno hw it is, u wil like it or nt but if u like it i wil be more than blessed!
ReplyDeleteIntezar ki ghadiya kabhi khatm nhi hoti,
Ek khatm hote dusara rukta nhi.
Aur intezar karte-karte,
zindagi ka karvan yuhi khatm ho jata hai,
kiuki sahi cheez ko parakhna har kisi ke bus ki baat nhi.
Bair karne ke bahane toh hazar milte hai,
kuch khud dikhte hai aur kuch log dikhate hai.
Galtiya karke he insaan seekhta hai!
Bura waqt har kisika ata hai!
Bura waqt hamesha yaad rehta hai,
Galtiya toh har koi karta hai,
toh maafi panne ka haq kiu nhi milta hai?.
Zindagi pachtave mae nikalne ka koi waqt nhi,
Aur bina koshish kiye marne ka koi aarth nhi,
Koshish karta rahunga zindagi ke antim saans tak,
Kiuki mera irada nek hai galat nhi.
Sahi kehte hai log ke pyar kuch nhi,
par ye bhi sach hai ki iss duniya mae impossible kuch nhi!!
Galtiya har kisi se hoti hai,
par ek bar baat sun samajhke koi nuksaan nhi.
Kisi ke baare mae galat sochna aasaan hai,
par bharosa karna itna bhi mushkil nhi.
Don't Make Perception jab tak aap kisiko achi tarah se jante nhi.
Intezar hai toh sab sahi karne ka,
Jo hai toh mushkil par namumkin nhi! :-)
i hope you liked it! Cudnt give much emotional touch but have tried enough to make it good enough! :)